This is the first song I wrote so it has always meant a lot to me. It's about dealing with changes.
Feel free to let me know what you think!
Hi Eric. First off I really like the melody, vocals and lyrics. I found the intro a little lengthy and up to the instrumental, a little sleepy but once there, WHAT A LEFT turn…caught me by surprise…really liked it. To me it has a modern pop genre sound to it…very unique and on that note, it should get you some mileage. Well done and thanks for putting it out there!!!
October 01, 2013
No members have liked this comment.
Great song Eric, I agree that in the beginning, I found it somewhat slow to go somewhere, but loved the solo and chorus. I listened a 2nd and 3rd time and really enjoyed it, something such sticks with you 
Great voice!
October 03, 2013
No members have liked this comment.
You must be signed in to post feedback.
0
Eric, Thanks for uploading this to Frettie. Bonus, for you uploading your first song you wrote as well. I enjoyed it. Although I found myself drifting off at one point, but you hit me at the perfect time with the simple solo. In some ways parts of this song have a Red Hot Chili Peppers feel to it. Not a bad thing. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to hearing others.
June 12, 2013
0
Hi Eric. First off I really like the melody, vocals and lyrics. I found the intro a little lengthy and up to the instrumental, a little sleepy but once there, WHAT A LEFT turn…caught me by surprise…really liked it. To me it has a modern pop genre sound to it…very unique and on that note, it should get you some mileage. Well done and thanks for putting it out there!!!
October 01, 2013
0
Great song Eric, I agree that in the beginning, I found it somewhat slow to go somewhere, but loved the solo and chorus. I listened a 2nd and 3rd time and really enjoyed it, something such sticks with you Great voice!
October 03, 2013
Do you want to have this song reviewed by an industry professional or a hit songwriter? Click on any of the professionals below to purchase your review.
Brent Baxter:
Pro Songwriter
$25.00/Song
Sam & Becca Mizell:
Hit Songwriters
$50.00/Song
Tell your peers about professional song reviews on Songwriting Pro.
×
Dennis Field
Eric, Thanks for uploading this to Frettie. Bonus, for you uploading your first song you wrote as well. I enjoyed it. Although I found myself drifting off at one point, but you hit me at the perfect time with the simple solo. In some ways parts of this song have a Red Hot Chili Peppers feel to it. Not a bad thing. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to hearing others.
June 12, 2013
No members have liked this comment.