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Sober Love

Joey Hendrickson

February 24, 2017

Genre: Pop

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Brent Baxter

Hey, Joey!  Thanks for sharing.  Cool title.  I dig how you use “sober love” multiple ways.  Allows you to repeat the title while also keeping it fresh.  I like that it moves with some groove and tempo.  Also, “we flew like a boulder” is a killer line.  There’s some really cool stuff in here.  No big hooky chorus, so I don’t know how it would do on radio, but I like it.  Nice job- good song!

March 06, 2017

Joey Hendrickson

Appreciate this, Brent! I’ll post more.

May 28, 2017

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I sure wasn't sober, love
but that wasn't a shoulder hug
I thought you were older, dove
We flew like a boulder, hun

We fell for that sugar rush
And I sure wasn't sober love
I gave you that mental fuck
You kissed like you'd be in touch

I just wanted that sober love

But you sure weren’t sober, love
We drank for the golden cup
You didn't think I was bad enough
You left like you had enough

Call it some Summer love
Love like a diamond cut
Future would be bad as fuck
If you and me were us

I just wanted that sober love

But I sure wasn’t sober, love
And you don’t call me back as much
And when you see me you kinda blush
I just take it as Irish luck

And maybe I blew it up
Said the wrong thing too much
I just wanted that truthful stuff
Like I want to know you and stuff..

I just wanted that sober love

And maybe I blew it up
But baby I had the guts
I just thought that you knew me but
I think I scared you way too much

I just wanted that sober love

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Brent Baxter

Hey, Joey!  Thanks for sharing.  Cool title.  I dig how you use “sober love” multiple ways.  Allows you to repeat the title while also keeping it fresh.  I like that it moves with some groove and tempo.  Also, “we flew like a boulder” is a killer line.  There’s some really cool stuff in here.  No big hooky chorus, so I don’t know how it would do on radio, but I like it.  Nice job- good song!

March 06, 2017

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Joey Hendrickson

Appreciate this, Brent! I’ll post more.

May 28, 2017


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