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Tyler Simmons and I sat down with Murray Daigle and Tyler and I came up with the idea for this conversational narrative song. Its really about a boy who just cant see the light and let go of his girl - despite the writing being on the wall 
Does the song grab you at all and can you relate to it. I am still a young writer and I write what I am thinking or feeling - which I am guessing can be both good and bad.
Thanks Wonder - I really appreciate your comments, and I agree. I think the song could complete more of a story and resolve, and another person I respect a ton said that the chorus needed to hit harder. I am going to work on that for sure!!! Thanks again
April 22, 2016
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Written by Murray Daigle, Tyler Simmons and Mikalyn Hay
Verse 1
Listen, please don't get me wrong
Im sorry but I cant do this
I dont know why you fail to see
were running out of space in here
Pre-Chorus
Cant you see that all I'm needing
is a little room for breathing
Your holding on
Your holding on...
Chorus
You got to You got to
Let it go let it go
You got to
Let it go let it go let it go
I wish you see you gotta save yourself
You gotto
Let it go let it go
You gotto
Let it go let it go let it go
Why cant you see you gotta save yourself.
Verse 2
Listened to what you've had to say
It doesnt change my mind at all
I dont think you understand
Ive gotta do whats right for me
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
Im sorry you feel decieved
but this aint working at all
You'll thank later for me this
cause you cant keep holding on, holding on
Chorus
You got to
Let it go let it go
You got to
Let it go let it go let it go
I wish you see you gotta save yourself
You gotto
Let it go let it go
You gotto
Let it go let it go let it go
Why cant you see you gotta save yourself.
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The production in the first few seconds definitely grabs me! It has enough variety within the first thirty seconds to promise a vibrant and diverse track.
Your voice is GORGEOUS. I love how colorful and rich your sound is.
AHHHHH the explosion into the chorus was perfect. I love this.
Also, this is catchy as hell. Well done. I don’t feel like it’s completely done yet…it’s lacking just a smidge of intensity in the chorus. Maybe a really bright bassline?
April 21, 2016
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Thanks Wonder - I really appreciate your comments, and I agree. I think the song could complete more of a story and resolve, and another person I respect a ton said that the chorus needed to hit harder. I am going to work on that for sure!!! Thanks again
April 22, 2016
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Wonder
The production in the first few seconds definitely grabs me! It has enough variety within the first thirty seconds to promise a vibrant and diverse track.
Your voice is GORGEOUS. I love how colorful and rich your sound is.
AHHHHH the explosion into the chorus was perfect. I love this.
Also, this is catchy as hell. Well done. I don’t feel like it’s completely done yet…it’s lacking just a smidge of intensity in the chorus. Maybe a really bright bassline?
April 21, 2016
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