Joined: November 15, 2013
Don Likes: 8 Songs
Don Nelson gave feedback on Feel Tomorrow
I like this song a lot - great vocals and great guitar playing. As far as instrumentation - although it sounds fine in its current arrangement - if you wanted to add more ingredients it might be cool to have a B-3 type keyboard oscillating and pinned fairly hard in... Read More
Don Nelson gave feedback on Start Living
Hi Dennis I like the song – and the John-Prine-ish delivery – nice! I like the idea of stopping to learn to appreciate the life one already has instead of constantly running after an idealized phantom…. Just an idea – but what about kind of going back and forth from past to present... Read More
Don Nelson gave feedback on This Time Around
It’s nice tune! For whatever it’s worth I can hear a kind of Penny-Lane-ish steady thrum arrangement on this.
Don Nelson gave feedback on Didn't have your voice yet
Hi I enjoyed the song. I hear what you’re saying about the repetition - maybe a bridge that starts off in A-major to walk it away form the C7-B7-Em thing might be cool - but it’s pleasantly relentless as is too!
Don Nelson gave feedback on Only Girl
great guitar playing and vocals again on a good song! Good structure (IMHO) but if you wanted to arrange it for a band - I hear a walking upright bass on this too - throughout the verses but also mimicking the notes on the “I don’t know” part. the... Read More