Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on The Cry Of Love

Always look forward to your songs Paul.  Great tune.  Really enjoyed it.

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Baby Blue Lies

Very nice song overall.  Great verses, melodically and lyrically.  I think the chorus could be improved with more variety in the melody (higher in parts) and less words ending in the long “I” sound.  Just my opinion on listening. I am not a songwriting expert.

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Paint Me The Rain

Thank you so much Jayne for the feedback.  I tried to use imagery in the verses to try to explain to the audience why I needed to get to the message in the chorus.  I will continue to play with the lyrics.  It means so much that... Read More

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Peace On Earth In Mama’s House

Great song Jim.  I could almost smell Grandma’s cooking from here.  Great imagery.

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on It’s Your Will

Another amazing song Will.  I love the message, so appropriate for these times.  I’ll do whatever I can to share it.  Great song!!