A co-write with friend and collaborator LaCarol Glover...our most relatable and real angle for the lyric. Pearl Snap Studios demo.
Any suggestions concerning improvements to the lyric or melody would be greatly appreciated.
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Called me to say you’d be workin’ late
crying to sleep once again
my box of tears on your dinner plate
Smellin' Chanel, where’ve you been?
Your business phone I can never touch
extra keys on the nightstand
A crooked picture hangin’ of us
Was the last time we held hands
Listen Up
Baby blue lies
Are so simple to disguise
When I’m with you I realize
The truth and I
Can’t compromise
My feelings and deny
Your love for me has died
So this is goodbye to those baby blue lies
Baby blue lies
Hearing you shower in the morning
Sending you our final text
I don’t care where you’ll be going
Tonight, you’ll be alone in this bed
I’ve prayed for days that you would do right
And hoping you’d change your ways
I’ve stayed so long you’re not worth the fight
It’s me who keeps gettin' played
Baby blue lies
Are so simple to disguise
When I’m with you I realize
The truth and I
Can’t compromise
My feelings and deny
Your love for me has died
So this is goodbye to those baby blue lies
Baby blue lies
I know it won't be long til you're caught out here cheatin' again
And I also know it’s wrong to believe that we could be friends
So take my wedding ring and memories go up in flames
for the next one who rents your last name
So, Baby blue lies
Are so simple to disguise
When I’m with you I realize
The truth and I
Can’t compromise
My feelings and deny
Your love for me has died
So this is goodbye to those baby blue lies
Baby blue lies
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Very nice song overall. Great verses, melodically and lyrically. I think the chorus could be improved with more variety in the melody (higher in parts) and less words ending in the long “I” sound. Just my opinion on listening. I am not a songwriting expert.
October 14, 2021
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Allan Rosensweig
Very nice song overall. Great verses, melodically and lyrically. I think the chorus could be improved with more variety in the melody (higher in parts) and less words ending in the long “I” sound. Just my opinion on listening. I am not a songwriting expert.
October 14, 2021
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