Joined: May 1, 2020
robert Likes: 12 Songs
Park Ridge, IL
No instruments, can 3 chord a keyboard, and play a little harmonica.
Main skill is production and mixing.
Old school singers and groups.
robert wronkiewicz gave feedback on Took the Party With You
The demo sounds great. But I feel the first 3 chorus lines have too many words, before getting to the 2 hook lines. With some shorter lines, I feel it would give the listener some time to reflect and anticipate the hook . Hope this help, just my opinion. Bob
robert wronkiewicz gave feedback on Same River Twice
Mike, Real nice feel to the track, music relaxed, tempo good, almost sounds bluegrass. Not quite sure if the hook is explained fully, I understand the concept, but maybe give a concrete example of the man changed. Just my 2 cents worth, good luck, Bob
robert wronkiewicz gave feedback on THIS JUST AIN’T GONNA WORK OUT
Track has a great feel, the organ adds so much, good luck with it. Bob
robert wronkiewicz gave feedback on Heartbreaks and Hallelujahs
Nice phrasing, and contrast between verse and chorus.