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Andrew Bashaw

November 20, 2013

Andrew Bashaw gave feedback on Ghost

Wow, well done! I like how much thought you put into musical aspects that a lot of singer-songwriters don’t pay attention to. The first thing I noticed was your drum beat… I like the creativity with the snare rolls and the syncopation on the intro/verse. The background vocals... Read More

November 20, 2013

Andrew Bashaw gave feedback on Cold, Cold Wind

I really enjoyed this track. Well produced and performed. The piano at the beginning perfectly captures the essence of the song. It sounds like snow… beautiful and bright but cold and harsh. I would love to hear a more daring chorus on this track. The verse holds back well, making... Read More

November 20, 2013

Andrew Bashaw gave feedback on OK

Thanks for the feedback and critiques, all!! Good points about the line “I can’t get over your face” being more superficial than the rest of the lyrics. I try to stay away from superficial lyrics whenever I can, and that was definitely a throwaway line that I could work... Read More

November 20, 2013

Andrew Bashaw gave feedback on A God Named Desire

It’s really hard to write a Christian song that stands out because of the similarities lyrically amongst them. It really helps to pick something really specific to communicate. You suggested the Trinity… perhaps write all your lyrics relating to the Trinity specifically. There’s certainly plenty to write about... Read More

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