Joined: March 12, 2020
BRAD Likes: 20 Songs
BRAD MAYS gave feedback on Our Bed Is Still Unmade (revised)
Love the melody. And the rhyme scheme is really nice. I was thinking there would be a bridge. Not sure how much more time you want to put into it, but a bridge could give you another dimension to the story. Just a thought. But, good stuff all around.
BRAD MAYS gave feedback on Write these songs for you
Gracias, amigo!