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Peter Scott

January 06, 2020

Peter Scott gave feedback on Victim of the system

Hi Mike, I really like the melody, the opening verse, the lyrics overall and the path of the story of finding God and not a government program for help. One thought about the villain of the story: “Prisoner of some foster care” paints foster care with a broad and negative... Read More

January 04, 2020

Peter Scott gave feedback on Strip Mall Church

Hi Mitch, this is a great original idea and the feel is very catchy. I like the humble imagery in the first lyric and the chorus. I totally like the song as it is, but you could also consider a different direction. As the story develops, could we perhaps meet... Read More

January 04, 2020

Peter Scott gave feedback on Them Old County Roads

Really nice feel to the song. I like the twist in this line: You’d tell me bout your messed up life Tell you how I messed up mine. I think the text is missing a line near the end of the chorus.

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