Joined: October 1, 2019
Mitch Likes: 15 Songs
Mitch Matthews gave feedback on TIME STOPPED
It has a general good feel to it, but it seems you use a lot of “plosive” consonants and some of the verses are a but crowded with words. The theme of the song is great, but perhaps the story needs more about how he/she is dealing with the... Read More
Mitch Matthews gave feedback on Only Every Minute
Nice, it has a slight Mary Chapin Carpenter feel to it.
Mitch Matthews gave feedback on Between Here And Heaven
I love it overall, a moving piece. I know that you are great at internal rhymes, so perhaps the line “all the way” could be “all the same” so that it has that powerful hard rhyme with “name.” But truly moving overall, thanks for the opportunity to listen and comment.
Mitch Matthews gave feedback on Grandma's Kitchen
Nice descriptive lines, and a heartfelt story.
Mitch Matthews gave feedback on Open Mic
Thank you so much for the comments!