Michael Parker gave feedback on 3 Drinks Into You

Alexsi, this is cool, I like the repeated lines in the verses that have slightly different meanings.  I guess I want the number 3 to have some meaning, otherwise it could be 2, could be 4, could be 10.  I see how it’s written, you have drinkin’ for 2 and then 3 drinks... Read More

Michael Parker gave feedback on She laid her head on my shoulder

I love the tempo changes… it totally works with the lyric and the tug-of-war of where the night will take them.

Michael Parker gave feedback on Chill

Nice stuff!  The only thing I could pick on is the switching back and forth between “you” and “her.”

Michael Parker gave feedback on Old Church Pew

Great lines and imagery, and some wordplay to boot!  I found myself wishing for a human story though.  An old man who has gone through phases of life-childhood, restless teen, missing 20s, married thirties, kids, widowed… Gone. Then it’s a relationship song with a narrative and not... Read More