Marilyn Oakley gave feedback on "In my rearview"

I like this. To me, in my humble opinion, it seems you should say “When we stood at the alter…..” as this story has moved on from that point, as is I pictured they are there at that moment; and then perhaps in the second line “I was sincere then... Read More

Marilyn Oakley gave feedback on First Love, Last Love

I like your song of love. Very nice melody for the words. Some nice imagery used.

Marilyn Oakley gave feedback on Moving Forward

Good job, James. I agree with Steve on the title and repeating it at the end of the chorus. Good marriage of words and music.

Marilyn Oakley gave feedback on The Light That's Leading Towards Tomorrow

thanks for sharing, I like this.

Marilyn Oakley gave feedback on My Angel - guitar vocal

Hi Kriz, This is a pretty song, I like the melody. As for a bridge I think as James suggested and then repeat the chorus. I like your song.