Dave Grandel gave feedback on Have Mercy On Me (Money In The Bank)

I think this song is well written, however it’s a little too positive for someone who is losing everything.  More to that point, in the bridge you wrote about squeezing the last few pennies in the tank, but back then a penny was worth a lot more than... Read More

Dave Grandel gave feedback on She Gets On My Wild Side

I like it!  I was expecting a red side, white side, and a blue side, but it worked well as is.

Dave Grandel gave feedback on Svärfar

This was a great listen… No idea what you’re singing, but solid melody/arrangement and I thought your vocal was good, too.  Did you double the vocal or use an octave device? 

Dave Grandel gave feedback on Out Here

Thanks Sheila, this camp has given me a new lease on life… It has allowed me a way to express myself that I’d shelved, for one reason or another, but no more!  I have about 27 songs written right now and another 300+ titles fragments and partially finished works, so... Read More

Dave Grandel gave feedback on Days Like These

Hi Frank, thanks for checking out my song and for your suggestions…I think there’s room to squeeze the title in at the end of the chorus, great idea, I’ll give that a go!  You’re also right about some guitar fills…being a solo performer I... Read More