Joined: November 7, 2018
Lee Likes: 8 Songs
Lee Myers gave feedback on Soul Sister
Liked the song’s feel. Did note, however, inconsistent use of pronouns ” she” and “you” throughout song. May try “she’s a soul sister..” or “you’re a soul sister…” to see which works better.
Brad, I love the positivity of this song. I particularly liked the second verse that begins “Mr. Circumstance…” This attention-getting verse is ear-catching and I had to smile after hearing it. You might even consider using it as the opening verse and develop a new second verse. I... Read More
Lee Myers gave feedback on Move On
Hi David, This song has a good theme: positive encouragement for a friend going through tough times. I think you have an opportunity to do something really cool with the song if you let the listener in on why you are singing to this person. Doing so, in my opinion,... Read More