Lee Myers gave feedback on Kingdom of Straw

Hi James, I like the way you frame your chorus by using the title on the first and last lines. The song, however, feels like it needs more contrast in melodic rhythmn and melodic pitch between each song section. Lifting the chorus so that it stands out from the other... Read More

Lee Myers gave feedback on Love's Gonna Get Us All

Hi Marvin, Your song has heart, and is a nice production with a fine singer expressing the theme of finding love.  All the elements for a satisfying listener experience are present. So, why did I feel a disconnect here? I couldn’t figure it out at first, but after... Read More

Lee Myers gave feedback on DAVID BRODIE - DECEMBER 24TH (ONE NIGHT)

Hi Tre, Nice production. Nice groove. Sounds like your song could easily be aimed at movie and tv placements. And, you have a tough assignment—-saying something new about Christmas.  Here, the nod to Mrs. Claus is different. Still, for me, that uniqueness got lost in the shifting viewpoints: ... Read More

Lee Myers gave feedback on Mining For Diamonds

Hi Reid: Love the positivity in your songs. This song has a solid foundation by expressing universal themes—looking for the right love and—the joy of finding love. The challenge is choosing the best point of view to express those themes. Here, the point of view shifts.  It... Read More

Lee Myers gave feedback on Different This Time

Hi Tommy and Lisa, I enjoyed the song. It touches upon an emotional subject and has a universal theme: wanting to be loved differently. And, everyone would like to have friends that care. Here’s what I hear section by section: First verse:  Nice visuals. Could be improved with... Read More