Bob Abner gave feedback on I Don't Fight Alone

Verse 1—imho, very solid—catches my attention Chorus—I like 2nd line (“You will defend it till the battle has ended”)—latter part of chorus needs to be tightened up (a little too meandering, both musically and lyrically Verse 2—some good lyric craft, that slightly less “gathered” than the first... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Pray

1) I DO believe in the power of prayer! 2) I like songs about prayer. 3) There’s not a whole lot musically (in this song) that makes me sit up and take notice. 4) I DO like the basic focus in the lyrics. Best of luck in your songwriting endeavors, and God bless... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Seek

First step: make sure your guitar is in tune (in this recording, it’s noticeably out of tune). Best of luck with songwriting!

Bob Abner gave feedback on I Thank God

Good subject matter (being thankful is ALWAYS in season, and not just the end of November)—on the one hand, you have a strong voice (in your upper range)—however, 1) during the verses, your melody doesn’t necessarily fit with your chords, and 2) sometimes there’s a little problem with... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on 'CAUSE I SAID SO

Rather heartfelt (good)—have a slight problem with linking “it’s good enough because 1) earthly parent says so, and 2) our Saviour says so”—but that may not bother other listeners at all—any way, a nice bit of songwriting craft—I liked it.