Bob Abner gave feedback on New

I like the verses (generally pretty succinct and gathered). Choruses—last double line works well to tie up the chorus (Lord, you make me new, Lord, you make me new)—however, prior to that (in the chorus), the lyrics seem meandering and too wordy. Musically, most of your songs are... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Glory

I like it—would fit nicely in a quiet spot in a Sunday morning worship service (possibly special music right before the sermon) One issue about lyrics: WHAT YOU HAVE CURRENTLY: I’m made free ‘cause you were bound for me I’m alive because you died Peace is found... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on On Earth In Us

I like your voice—would have liked to follow along with the lyrics—I DO think there are some definite nice spots in this song.

Bob Abner gave feedback on On Earth In Us

I’m curious—how come you didn’t post lyrics for this song?

Bob Abner gave feedback on Every Word

Brent Baxter—nice interesting comments (and valid, imho) James—I just want to let you know that I think you are already a songwriter (you seem to already have the song), and the only things I really notice about your songs are matters of craft/skill, which can ALWAYS be... Read More