A song that came out of a moment of worship
Not sure I will change a lot on this because it is just a song of worship that I never considered something that I was trying to make commercial. Still, as always, I welcome honest and unfiltered feedback.
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Glory James Simmons Music 2014
G C
Glory, glory to the Lord almighty
Em C
Holy is the name
G C
The one and only who paid the highest price
Em C
That I could never pay
Em D C
I’m made free ‘cause you were bound for me
Em D C
I’m alive because you died
Em D C
Peace is found within your victory
Em D C
Nothing stands before your might
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I like it—would fit nicely in a quiet spot in a Sunday morning worship service (possibly special music right before the sermon)
One issue about lyrics:
WHAT YOU HAVE CURRENTLY:
I’m made free ‘cause you were bound for me
I’m alive because you died
Peace is found within your victory
Nothing stands before your might
2 POSSIBLE ALTERNATIVES:
I’m made free ‘cause you were BOUND FOR ME
I’m alive because you DIED FOR ME
Peace is found within your VICTORY
Nothing stands before your might
(first three lines rhyme)
I’m made free ‘cause you were crucified
I’m alive because you died
Peace is found within your victory
Nothing stands before your might
(first 2 lines rhyme)
Again, I just want to encourage you in your songwriting!
August 06, 2018
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I like it—would fit nicely in a quiet spot in a Sunday morning worship service (possibly special music right before the sermon)
One issue about lyrics:
WHAT YOU HAVE CURRENTLY:
I’m made free ‘cause you were bound for me
I’m alive because you died
Peace is found within your victory
Nothing stands before your might
2 POSSIBLE ALTERNATIVES:
I’m made free ‘cause you were BOUND FOR ME
I’m alive because you DIED FOR ME
Peace is found within your VICTORY
Nothing stands before your might
(first three lines rhyme)
I’m made free ‘cause you were crucified
I’m alive because you died
Peace is found within your victory
Nothing stands before your might
(first 2 lines rhyme)
Again, I just want to encourage you in your songwriting!
August 06, 2018
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