Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Lucky Paradise

This one is really sweet. There are a lot of really tough times in marriage, but it’s so worth it. I think the lyrics could use a little bit of refinement, but I was touched by this. I think the marketability could be tricky because it does have a... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on This Ring

As men*

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on This Ring

Thank you so much Chris and Larry. Never underestimate your indispensable worth as a man.

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on You're okay

This one is appealing to me. So many get stuck in their failures. I know that I have. The only feedback I have is the lyric “and don’t know where’s the light” sounds awkward. That’s it. But yes, this song has a very nice melody, pretty good... Read More

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on More than Accidents

First of all, I love your voice. Love it, so sweet. The melody could use a little more work but you have a great foundation here. The dreamy feeling makes you consider how wondrous creation is. It sounds kind of ethereal. Another thing is when the lyric in the chorus... Read More