Evolution can get us so far, there are too many patterns to ignore in life to deny an existence of a divine creator. I don't have a good recording. I was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to share with me a good home recording studio link, website, or brand.
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Thanks for your feedback. I might message you about your home recording studio.
February 11, 2018
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Hi Ani, the song is okay, but it doesn’t really touch me.
I believe you have much more to say. Try to express your deepest feelings and grab your listeners heart, you have a wonderful voice to do that.
February 20, 2018
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First of all, I love your voice. Love it, so sweet. The melody could use a little more work but you have a great foundation here. The dreamy feeling makes you consider how wondrous creation is. It sounds kind of ethereal. Another thing is when the lyric in the chorus states or repeats “we are more than accidents. Something else needs to be put there. Also, maybe mention babies or children or loved ones or specific creatures that make God’s nature and authorship evident. You have a really great start her.
April 23, 2018
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Amazing how we're made
from strings of DNA
a cell becomes a man
how can't there be a plan
Life's patterns existing
Golden ratio spiraling
How can these patterns be
Accidents Randomly
Chorus
We are more than accidents
so much more than coincidence
we are rare and so precious
we're more than accidents
Evolution does exist, even it has purpose
Blueprints are all around
Look for them, they'll be found
Chorus
Bridge
There is purpose
in creation
Heaven's made us
God's children
Chorus
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Hi Ani. I record my demos at my own home recording studio that I set up over the last year and a half. It’s pretty inexpensive to do, and if you want advice on that feel free to message me. As for your song, I would like to hear more variations in the melody / vocal performance. The verses and chorus feel very similar. Also, it seems like the verse and chorus structure is very short. I would like to hear longer, more melodically distinct sections in your song.
February 11, 2018
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Thanks for your feedback. I might message you about your home recording studio.
February 11, 2018
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Hi Ani, the song is okay, but it doesn’t really touch me.
I believe you have much more to say. Try to express your deepest feelings and grab your listeners heart, you have a wonderful voice to do that.
February 20, 2018
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First of all, I love your voice. Love it, so sweet. The melody could use a little more work but you have a great foundation here. The dreamy feeling makes you consider how wondrous creation is. It sounds kind of ethereal. Another thing is when the lyric in the chorus states or repeats “we are more than accidents. Something else needs to be put there. Also, maybe mention babies or children or loved ones or specific creatures that make God’s nature and authorship evident. You have a really great start her.
April 23, 2018
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Hi Ani. I record my demos at my own home recording studio that I set up over the last year and a half. It’s pretty inexpensive to do, and if you want advice on that feel free to message me. As for your song, I would like to hear more variations in the melody / vocal performance. The verses and chorus feel very similar. Also, it seems like the verse and chorus structure is very short. I would like to hear longer, more melodically distinct sections in your song.
February 11, 2018
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