This is the first time I added drums to my songs. It's about being okay with hard days. I tried to write an easy song so I could add the drums.
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I like the message of the song and your voice. It’s a positive vibe we can all use at some time. If it were slowed down more, I think it would have more punch. Giving your voice some space to relax and work might sound great. It didn’t sound like you were 100% comfortable with that strum pattern on the guitar, so slowing down and mixing in arpeggios could help develop a tighter performance.
March 22, 2018
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This one is appealing to me. So many get stuck in their failures. I know that I have. The only feedback I have is the lyric “and don’t know where’s the light” sounds awkward. That’s it. But yes, this song has a very nice melody, pretty good lyrics, and personally, I need to hear more songs like this. As it says, everyday is fresh start with Him, thank God.
April 23, 2018
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so you didn't get your way today
so you weren't right this time
so you made the same mistake
and you don't know where's the light
chorus
You're alright, you're ok
we've all had hard days
Don't let it bring you down, it's over
you're alright, you're ok
we've all made mistakes
Just let it go, and move on
You worry about that day
Think over what's been done
So you think that you can change
and be ok with what went wrong
chorus
Bridge: you can't change the past, but you can change, how you see what's done
chorus
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I like how it sounds, but I would like it to have more bite ‘lyrically’, especially in the verses. Maybe you could paint a picture of her perfect world come crashing down etc. She just had one of those days. I would like to see more bite in the verses.
March 03, 2018
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I like the message of the song and your voice. It’s a positive vibe we can all use at some time. If it were slowed down more, I think it would have more punch. Giving your voice some space to relax and work might sound great. It didn’t sound like you were 100% comfortable with that strum pattern on the guitar, so slowing down and mixing in arpeggios could help develop a tighter performance.
March 22, 2018
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This one is appealing to me. So many get stuck in their failures. I know that I have. The only feedback I have is the lyric “and don’t know where’s the light” sounds awkward. That’s it. But yes, this song has a very nice melody, pretty good lyrics, and personally, I need to hear more songs like this. As it says, everyday is fresh start with Him, thank God.
April 23, 2018
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I like how it sounds, but I would like it to have more bite ‘lyrically’, especially in the verses. Maybe you could paint a picture of her perfect world come crashing down etc. She just had one of those days. I would like to see more bite in the verses.
March 03, 2018
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