Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Mount Everest

I loved the song as a whole, as it all flowed nicely. I would fix the lines that were supposed to rhyme but didn’t.

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

Thank you, Lisa for your comments and suggestions. Yes, you are right that that part doesn’t flow as well, and we could use it as the bridge (as suggested). I appreciate all your comments. Thank you…

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on A Barfly's Benediction

A funny, little song that I could see it in the hands of a comedian who sings or comedy singer. Well done. I think another verse inbetween one and two would be great, as this might be a little short for someone to record. Anyway, I want to hear more!

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Read My Eyes (Edited)

I hope you find someone to put music to your lyrics, or someone who is great with lyrics and melody. I’m writing with a few people at the moment. You will soon find someone who you click with. I’m in the same boat. I only write lyrics. I... Read More

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Life Was Fantastic With You

Great song! Very moving, and the production and singing was spot on!