Gordon Donaldson :: Songwriting Pro :: Helping Songwriters Turn Pro

Joined: February 11, 2018

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Gordon Donaldson

Mortlake, Victoria, Australia

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Writing has always been something I’ve always been good, and it’s taken me places (especially in my imagination). Out of all the writing I have done, writing comedy, poetry, and fiction has been the most fun. I make a living from writing business copy and comedy, but one day I dream of writing lyrics for a living. I would also love to co-write with others who have the same dream.

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Mike Chapman, Bernie Taupin, Lennon & McCartney, The Bee Gees,

February 21, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Homeless Sky

This song has a nice feel to it, although it doesn’t quite flow in some parts. You could make the 1st verse clearer. Just a little rewriting here and there. But I like the poetic style of this song. Well done.

February 20, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Known for Love

Great story and easy to listen to. Love the title.

February 20, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Seek

You have a beautiful voice. I felt there was a lack of fluency with lyrics and music. Some lyrics could be improved by finding alternatives or better lines. 2nd verse is well done, but you might need to improve the 1st verse.

February 20, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on The Good Hearted People

Nice work, Ronald. Easy to listen to. I just felt the background vocals in the chorus would be a nice contrast to use a different voice, maybe a softer voice when repeating what you have sung.

February 20, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

Ani Bergman I have just posted the lyrics

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