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Nice work, Ronald. Easy to listen to. I just felt the background vocals in the chorus would be a nice contrast to use a different voice, maybe a softer voice when repeating what you have sung.
February 20, 2018
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THE GOOD HEARTED PEOPLE
By Happy Ron Hill
Sometimes I don’t trust e-NOUGH
And sometimes I don’t love enough
I don’t always remember the names
Sometimes I don’t think enough
Sometimes I don’t drink enough
I think that is just a shame
I need to remember
Who I am here for
And not think that I need
Any more
Cause,
Life is pretty good
Life is pretty sweet
Life is pretty fine
When you’ve got the good-hearted people
Behind you
Some will just talk too much
Some will not hear enough
They just think it’s all about them.
Some will just want back in
Some will take it on the chin
Always tryin to go round again.
But why do I think twice
‘bout THOSE I should ignore
When I’ve always had
So Much more
REPEAT CHORUS
Don’t you don’t you forget
Don’t you don’t you forget
Don’t you don’t you ever forget it
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Nice work, Ronald. Easy to listen to. I just felt the background vocals in the chorus would be a nice contrast to use a different voice, maybe a softer voice when repeating what you have sung.
February 20, 2018
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February 20, 2018
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