Frank Renfordt gave feedback on When I Lay Dying

Very, very cool - the best one you have posted so far. Like all about the song, the feel, the lyrics, the solos! Great work!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Why We Work

Hi Evan, I like the feel of the song and for me it is easy to relate too. Good work! Your chorus is nice, however not every line of the chorus gears clearly towards the hook, it feels the hook-line comes a little bit out of nowhere. The chorus could... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Family Tree

Hi Richard - I nice idea - my family doesn’t have anything like a family tree, but I can relate totally. A fiddle would be a good fit if you consider to make a full band demo. I like this song! Good luck!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on The Rug Scuffle Shuffle

Hi Kyle, I thought as much, but never heard the expression before. Thank you for your detailed explanation. I admire your knowledge of these old style music and lyrics, you are really a specialist. Do you write books about that stuff? If not - you should consider that. I’m... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on The Rug Scuffle Shuffle

I like your funny word play, however I’m not sure if I got everything. ‘Scuffle a/her rug’  - is it just nonsense or is it ambiguous?