Rick McGee gave feedback on Ladylike

I like the song, mostly because of the phrasing and the “opposite” lyric images (white dress, muddy truck, etc)  But I do agree with Brandon that the apron / biscuits line doesn’t work for me either because it doesn’t give that opposite image. I rather see her in... Read More

Rick McGee gave feedback on I Don't Fight Alone

Good song, James!  My suggestion is similar to Jayne’s because I really like the melody of the first three lines in your chorus.  After line three, I’d go back and repeat lines one and two, then go to the line, “no matter the foe”.  I... Read More

Rick McGee gave feedback on You're My Weakness

This real good, Debbie.  One lyric comment:  1st verse, last line -  maybe change “Then” to “When” because the back to back “th” (Then that) is difficult to sing.  I enjoyed it!

Rick McGee gave feedback on Take My Time

James, there’s a lot in here that I really like. A lyric kind of threw me…  “I wanna burn this candle at both ends”  makes me think of living hard and fast - the opposite of your message.  I know you tie it into the “bottle... Read More

Rick McGee gave feedback on He Raised Me Up

Thanks for the feedback Andrea!  Not to throw my singer under the bus… his name is Joe Thompson and I think he has a cool, unique sound, too.  I really like the way he phrases lyrics.  However, he was a bit “pitchy” that day.  We didn’... Read More