We hall have someone or something we just can't let go....
Thank you so much Sandra! I appreciate you taking time to listen and your feedback!
~Debbie
January 31, 2018
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This real good, Debbie. One lyric comment: 1st verse, last line - maybe change “Then” to “When” because the back to back “th” (Then that) is difficult to sing. I enjoyed it!
February 01, 2018
Thank for your thoughts and for taking the time to listen Rick! ~Debbie
February 01, 2018
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Man how true this song is..Hits right at home..Love it Debbie..“Like that empty shotglass thrown against my door” great line, I can see that
February 20, 2018
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You're My Weakness
By
Debbie Convoy (debsk8r@aol.com)
soundcloud.com/debbie-convoy
VS 1
Everybody's got something they won't admit,
A weakness that they can't resist.
A part of you wants to forget/ that sin you must confess
You try to drown the memories in your soul
But the Whiskey lets the truth unfold
Then that weakness appears/ and you lose all control..
CH 1
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness…
VS 2
When you left my heart shattered on the floor
like that empty shot glass, thrown against my door
Prayed the whiskey and the rain/ would wash away the pain
This is all wrong….This can't be right
Why can't I turn….. and walk away from you tonight?
CH 2
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness…
Bridge
You're the sin I must confess
You're the one I can't ignore
I can't fight it anymore
Baby it's you… It's always been you…
You're my weakness….
CH 3
When you whisper close to me
I feel your breath upon my cheek
And my heart soars/ my knees go weak
It’s the scent of you on my sheets/
Oh it's your midnight knock on my front door/ I can fight it no more
Baby it's You! It's always been you,
You're my weakness… You're my Weakness… You're my weakness...
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Very pretty song! I dont have anything else to say but I really like the imagery. The song flows really well from idea to idea. Great job!
January 31, 2018
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Thank you so much Sandra! I appreciate you taking time to listen and your feedback!
~Debbie
January 31, 2018
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This real good, Debbie. One lyric comment: 1st verse, last line - maybe change “Then” to “When” because the back to back “th” (Then that) is difficult to sing. I enjoyed it!
February 01, 2018
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Thank for your thoughts and for taking the time to listen Rick! ~Debbie
February 01, 2018
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Man how true this song is..Hits right at home..Love it Debbie..“Like that empty shotglass thrown against my door” great line, I can see that
February 20, 2018
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Sandra Lynn
Very pretty song! I dont have anything else to say but I really like the imagery. The song flows really well from idea to idea. Great job!
January 31, 2018