Joined: December 19, 2017
Tony Likes: 19 Songs
Tony True gave feedback on I Thought Wrong
Yup like I said it all helps…it’s a work in progress and I’m trying to figure out where to take the song and what to do with it… Other comments I had from another songwriting site were that they felt the male character was a bit of... Read More
Tony True gave feedback on Back in 63
Kevin, A nice song and melody but a few things I caught are below. I hope you don’t take offence to anything as I really do like the song I’m just trying to pass on the little bit I feel I do know about song writing. 1. The... Read More
Tony True gave feedback on Not Knowing
Ok if I follow your question then it would be… V1 - Return & Learn - Curse & Worst (asinine, near rhyme) V2 - Trust & Us - Honestly & me As far as iambic pentameter goes…sorry way out of my league of writing..lol