Tony True gave feedback on This Bed Has Held Us Before

As always you have a great melody… I’m just not sure that the verses work as there doesn’t seem to be a rhyming scheme… Also it seems that in the chorus before the solo your lyrics changed but they weren’t reflected in the lyrics.  And it... Read More

Tony True gave feedback on Don’t Be Surprised

Some good imagery in here looks like you have a good start on things.

Tony True gave feedback on Music and my woman

Anytime….let me know if you want to do some writing… .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)/*= 0)out += unescape(l[i].replace(/^\s\s*/, '&#'));while (--j >= 0)if (el[j].getAttribute('data-eeEncEmail_dOXCoLoqnd'))el[j].innerHTML = out;/*]]>*/ TTFN…

Tony True gave feedback on Music and my woman

Great John Fogerty sound to your voice and the recording…and it’s not near a bad a recording as you may think. Actually the first line doesn’t bother me at all…maybe cause I knew what it meant right away. Lyrically it’s the best song I’ve... Read More

Tony True gave feedback on Thats what countrys about

Actually it wasn’t what I expected based on your “about” of the song.  There are some really good things going on in here. The chorus is pretty good…catchy and memorable it’s what you want. I found your second verse written better than the first one. ... Read More