This is a song about a guy chasing his dream to be a singer in Nashville, he's living the dream with his two most cherished loves.... his music and his woman.
Every aspect, all feedback is appreciated.
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The first line needs to be changed. Mainly because when you say needing me a change. I’m thinking - long ride, bad gas? Know what I mean…. Needing me a change. Maybe doesn’t mean that to other people. But that was the first thing that came to my mind.
If you said, needing to make a change, or something else like searching for a change. Just a thought.
I like let your woman and your women set you free. The only concern is I can’t tell when you are changing it. Made it difficult for me to sing along. Like is it going to my woman this time or your woman. Just a thought there. I like that though. Let your women and your music set you free. That’s stuck in my head now. Thanks for that. lol
January 22, 2018
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sorry correction. I like let your woman and your women set you free. to let your woman and your music
January 22, 2018
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I get what ur saying about change . I just thought 2nd line explained it but I take a look ... yea the woman thing if I ever recorded would b something I’d change ..Thx for the info ..good stuff
January 22, 2018
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Great John Fogerty sound to your voice and the recording…and it’s not near a bad a recording as you may think.
Actually the first line doesn’t bother me at all…maybe cause I knew what it meant right away.
Lyrically it’s the best song I’ve listened to of your yet…IMO
The only thing I heard/saw was in the second verse you broke the rhyme scheme in the other 2 verses you rhymed the 3rd line with the first 2 and in the 2nd verse you didn’t…it’s no a big deal…
I guess for the chorus when you say “Let my music and my woman set me free”. You are talking literally about your woman and emotionally about your music?...
I agree with Brandon…pick one way to say the refrain line and try to tie it in with the verses as it seems like it’s more like a refrain than a chorus…nothing wrong with that though.
January 24, 2018
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Thank You Tony I appreciate it a lot. I always believed in this song and had fun writing it. Yes you hit the woman and music on the head my friend.
January 24, 2018
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Anytime….let me know if you want to do some writing…
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TTFN…
January 25, 2018
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Headed down to Nashville I was a needing me a change. Now things weren't the same back home and it's only me to blame.
Daddy said son all you got is your reputation and your name. Just let your Music and your woman set you free. Oh let your Music and your woman set you free
I been singing and playing guitar i been living in these bar's, Put my life on paper trying to reach high for the stars.
One foot in heaven I got one foot deep in hell
Just let my Music and my Woman set me free, Oh let my Music and my woman set me free.
You got one chance in Life boy take it while you can
Don't be afraid to fail some time's you've gotta crawl before ya stand
You never know what God has planned
Just let your Music and your woman set you free
I am a little bit older now and getting wiser everyday. I am so thankful for all I have and the help along the way
And don't take it for granted ya'll cause God might call today
Just let your Music and your woman set you free
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‘Let your music and your woman set you free’, I like that! My husband and I are here living ‘my dream’. Great stuff!
January 19, 2018
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The first line needs to be changed. Mainly because when you say needing me a change. I’m thinking - long ride, bad gas? Know what I mean…. Needing me a change. Maybe doesn’t mean that to other people. But that was the first thing that came to my mind.
If you said, needing to make a change, or something else like searching for a change. Just a thought.
I like let your woman and your women set you free. The only concern is I can’t tell when you are changing it. Made it difficult for me to sing along. Like is it going to my woman this time or your woman. Just a thought there. I like that though. Let your women and your music set you free. That’s stuck in my head now. Thanks for that. lol
January 22, 2018
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sorry correction. I like let your woman and your women set you free. to let your woman and your music
January 22, 2018
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I get what ur saying about change . I just thought 2nd line explained it but I take a look ... yea the woman thing if I ever recorded would b something I’d change ..Thx for the info ..good stuff
January 22, 2018
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Great John Fogerty sound to your voice and the recording…and it’s not near a bad a recording as you may think.
Actually the first line doesn’t bother me at all…maybe cause I knew what it meant right away.
Lyrically it’s the best song I’ve listened to of your yet…IMO
The only thing I heard/saw was in the second verse you broke the rhyme scheme in the other 2 verses you rhymed the 3rd line with the first 2 and in the 2nd verse you didn’t…it’s no a big deal…
I guess for the chorus when you say “Let my music and my woman set me free”. You are talking literally about your woman and emotionally about your music?...
I agree with Brandon…pick one way to say the refrain line and try to tie it in with the verses as it seems like it’s more like a refrain than a chorus…nothing wrong with that though.
January 24, 2018
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Thank You Tony I appreciate it a lot. I always believed in this song and had fun writing it. Yes you hit the woman and music on the head my friend.
January 24, 2018
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Anytime….let me know if you want to do some writing…
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TTFN…
January 25, 2018
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‘Let your music and your woman set you free’, I like that! My husband and I are here living ‘my dream’. Great stuff!
January 19, 2018
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