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Robert Lloyd

July 02, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on If I Had Listened

Marvin… This is a super ballad (excellent singer BTW) and I could see someone taking this one big time. By the way, your demo recording quality is consistently very nice and top shelf. And I like the story line but I really really like the music, melody and the chord... Read More

July 02, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on John

Hi Barry… Always look forward to your next song! With this one…I believe the soundtrack and melody is to in-sync unless you intentionally wanted that? For that reason it sound too repetitious. A simple variation of the melody would fix that. And the horns sound too artificial with the... Read More

July 01, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Love's An Eternal Flame

To the contrary, I thought you sang this well as a singer-songwriter. Nice idea of a song. As to be pitched I would have no idea. Good job on this one.

June 29, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on SHE'S HARD TO READ

Hi Bob… Lively, upbeat and light fare of a song. I really like the melody. You could have gone several ways with this production and put in a few steel drums and you would of had a Jimmy Buffett feel. Kenny Chesney possibly would like this one as he is... Read More

June 27, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Since He Won't Leave

Hi Graham… this is tough. Lyrically, it is difficult for me to listen to a song about a man that stays with his wife that has been unfaithful. I don’t want to go further biblically as that is not what we are about in this forum. Those are my... Read More

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