Joined: May 26, 2017
Robert Likes: 19 Songs
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on John
Hi Barry… Always look forward to your next song! With this one…I believe the soundtrack and melody is to in-sync unless you intentionally wanted that? For that reason it sound too repetitious. A simple variation of the melody would fix that. And the horns sound too artificial with the... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Love's An Eternal Flame
To the contrary, I thought you sang this well as a singer-songwriter. Nice idea of a song. As to be pitched I would have no idea. Good job on this one.
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on SHE'S HARD TO READ
Hi Bob… Lively, upbeat and light fare of a song. I really like the melody. You could have gone several ways with this production and put in a few steel drums and you would of had a Jimmy Buffett feel. Kenny Chesney possibly would like this one as he is... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Since He Won't Leave
Hi Graham… this is tough. Lyrically, it is difficult for me to listen to a song about a man that stays with his wife that has been unfaithful. I don’t want to go further biblically as that is not what we are about in this forum. Those are my... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on If I Had Listened
Marvin… This is a super ballad (excellent singer BTW) and I could see someone taking this one big time. By the way, your demo recording quality is consistently very nice and top shelf. And I like the story line but I really really like the music, melody and the chord... Read More