Brian Blevins gave feedback on Picture in a Drawer

hey sean i read the lyrics.  as i was typing what i thought of the lyrics, i scrolled up to see the other feedback. saved me some typing since i got the same impression of the emotional conflict going on here. maybe in the first line of the chorus... Read More

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Back To Quittin You

hey sean, the second part of V1 reminds me of something i used to say which is ‘i only smoke when i drink and now i drink all of the time.’ overall i think this is very solid song.  it feels more like rock to me.  i would... Read More

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Token Gestures

CJ, I like the lyrics and the song.  However I do feel that are   places where the flow of the lyrics could be improved.  They read well on paper but when I listened to the song as I read the lyrics, there were lines that to me... Read More

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Hard Act to Follow

Hi Ric & Fayh, I really like the opening line however I think the word is lay in this context but I would have to look it up. Also the line “I’ve been lost” (present perfect) makes me this you have been lost until now.  if you are... Read More

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Made Right Here

i like this song Gregg.  great slide work as well.