Richard Kirk gave feedback on Cross Your Heart

Hey Marvin.  Always enjoy listening to your stuff, so well set up and thought out. Just wondering if tenses are a little confusing in a couple places. Song is in the present tense mostly,” He loves”, etc. then in BR you have he’d started” instead of maybe He’... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Fall on Me

well, I’m not that familiar with Christian rock, but I could see how this could fit there. On the other hand, if that’s where you want this to go, I think it should be more obvious-which I realize would maybe take away the secular. It’s a trade... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Treading Water

Hey, loved the title and overall concept. Like Brent I want to hear The title more, especially as the payoff at the end of the chorus.  Guess some others have said that. Some good internal rhymes, though one has to be careful not to overdo them.  Good production,... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Five-String

Had the same reaction at first to the banjo.  I’m sure you guys must have thought of that. Many times over the years I’ve gone back and forth about writing a different meaning to what seems to be the obvious interpretation. I don’t know if this... Read More