Joined: May 1, 2017
Jackson Likes: 47 Songs
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Music In You
It actually sounded better to me on a second listen… it reminded me of a Jeff Buckley version of a famous LC song and the guitar sound of your song is so haunting, I could not get it out of my mind and tried to figure it out. I still... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Music In You
Hey Brent, I like your song. Works for me as a demo that shows a lot of promise with a good vocal and an interesting guitar part which is at times a bit high in the mix (which is also Philip’s point above, I guess) and needs support from... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Grind
Hey Philip, I am very grateful for your feedback! My first constructive feedback from a fellow lyricist. To your points: First person is fine if I am singing it… and if Country Big Star is singing it, 3rd person seems more natural to me and him, I think. I’d... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Drinking Wine with Jesus
Hey Philip, Thanks for checking out my song Grind. More than happy to return the favor…:-) I grew up on the Bob and Donovan (Childs’ and Cecil Sharp’s ballads also a big influence through Fairport Convention and Steeleye Span) and your song sounds more folk than country to... Read More
Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Two Cents
Hi Amber, I have to admit that the vocal did not grab me, but the lyrics are, IMVHO, very well written, though incomplete… I am not convinced that you are leaving a guy just because he does not like your cooking and/or the way you dress. If that is... Read More