Joey Hendrickson gave feedback on Collide

Robert: I’ve heard many people tell me they believe the second verse is the Chorus. I hope this doesn’t make the listener lose track of the story, but did intend it as an ear-catch.

Joey Hendrickson gave feedback on OK

Stream of Consciousness: I like that guitar melody. Opening line is great.  “Doubt.  It creeps into our mind.” I missed the conclusion of first verse stanza. “But not out of each other, just out of this mess.”  Chorus first three lines are nice. I like the O-K... Read More

Joey Hendrickson gave feedback on Slow Ride (Long Road)

Stream of Consciousness: You know how to tell a story. Your voice is so easy to listen to. “Gotta keep my fingers crossed, and put on a better show.” You don’t sound jaded to me. You’ve paid your dues. “Gotta fill up on my fearlessness.” Someone take a... Read More

Joey Hendrickson gave feedback on Feel For You

Compliment: Melody is perfect. Criticism: Too much “feel” on chorus. I want you to keep my attention with the lyrics. Favorite line: “When I know, I know.”

Joey Hendrickson gave feedback on Pool of Dreams

Stream of Consciousness: I love the whistles. I wish the mic was closer to your voice. I love the sound of the guitar. Chorus has nice melody. Overall song is easy going. “And I lost myself in a pool of dreams. And I thought I would fly away.  Or... Read More