Martin Vipond gave feedback on Heart Less You

Hi Alexis!  Good song!  Here’s what I noticed. I like the description of a broken heart as being my heart less you. That’s a unique picture. But, I’d leave out the math symbol. So many people confuse > and < . I really like the construction... Read More

Martin Vipond gave feedback on Song on the Radio

Great song, guys! Could be a winner. Here’s what I notice - I like the groove, it seems pretty current. The verse melody is good too, catchy. I like the “different” chord in the progression at the end of the phrases. The chorus melody lands on the same notes... Read More

Martin Vipond gave feedback on Tired of Nashville

I think your melodies are okay, and the chord progression is good. As far as worktapes go, it demonstrates the song. If I were your co-writer, I’d suggest refocusing the song by changing every “she”, to “You”. Personalize it, by singing it to her, not me. I’d also... Read More

Martin Vipond gave feedback on In My Mind

I like this song idea a lot. Some pretty good imagery. It’s relatable to a lot if not most everyone. I like the production too. I kinda miss hearing a chorus. You’ve got a great hook line. Maybe you could rework one of the verses into a great... Read More

Martin Vipond gave feedback on Love At First Dance

Good story, nice images - I can see the room - a hopeful m sage in the hook. A hooky melody too. Nice!