Noel Gama gave feedback on Blind Vision (Demo)

Thank you for the review, Brent! Yes, it’s quite abstract - may be because I first wrote it in the first person - I was the blind man. But from that perspective, besides the abstraction, it also came across as preachy so I changed the lyrics to third person. ... Read More

Noel Gama gave feedback on Blind Vision (Demo)

Thanks again, Dick! I find myself going into abstractions often - in my nonfiction writing, in lyrics and… in my train of thoughts:)

Noel Gama gave feedback on Take A Stand

Thank you, Dick! I followed the steps in Andea Stolpe’s book - what she calls, “Destination Writing” - to generate those images and lyric phrases:)

Noel Gama gave feedback on Take A Stand

Hi JC! Thank you for giving it a listen and for your feedback. Yes, that’s the first thing I noticed when I got the demo - the words are not clear in the verses, though the session vocalist did a good job otherwise. To compensate for this, I got... Read More

Noel Gama gave feedback on Blind Vision (Demo)

Thank you for taking the time to give it a thorough listen and then to go on and write in so much detail. Much appreciated, Sean! Yes, the verses are still a bit abstract and needs a couple of specifics. Thanks again, Sean!