Joined: October 15, 2015
Paul Likes: 33 Songs
Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on I Am Beautiful
Hi Dave I’m quickly becoming a fan of your writing. The demo is good, the melody and changes are good. So, if you don’t mind, let me dig a little deeper. IMNSHO, the lyrics could make this song great. 0. The lyrics, as written, blow the... Read More
Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on Green Light
Very clever writing! I’ve listened to it twice and I feel that there is not enough separation in the production - too much stuff is sitting too close to the centre and maybe some EQ’ing could help. But, this is probably just a demo and it probably doesn’... Read More
Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on Hella Good Time
The hardest thing to do is to critique one’s own songs. I am continuously amazed by the critiques I get and how I could have missed their points. I hope that this site is about that - getting valuable critiques.
Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on Taken
I dunno. Something doesn’t connect with me, lyrically. When the song goes from V1 to the Chorus, it sounds like the singer is refusing her advances, but then the last line is confusing - I’m taken with you. It reverses everything I thought I knew... Read More
Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on I Am Beautiful
You do know about B-rhymes.com???