gave feedback on Wishing

Mary, thank you very much for your feedback! This song is very beautiful…emotionally moving and heartfelt. I can’t offered any constructive criticism because I think it is perfectly crafted as it is- the lyrics are meaningful and honest, well structured with nice melodic phrasing and dynamics. I am... Read More

gave feedback on Midnight Streets of Campus

Very catchy tune!...and I Like the way you book-ended it.

gave feedback on Turn Around

Really nice sound….reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel….and impressive guitar skills!

gave feedback on The Water's Way

I like the message and the poetry of your lyrics. Nice contrast musically with the verse and chorus. I would play around with the melody to see what else might develop. I agree with Dennis that adding a bridge would help build the song further. Happy songwriting