Brent Baxter gave feedback on Lie To Me

Hey, Kay!  You and Mark make a good team.  The title is pretty common.  So in the future, go for more unique titles.  I like that there is some energy to this one.  It’s not a “positive” song, but the movement keeps it more... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Horizon

Thanks for sharing your work with us, Greg!  I like the title.  I like that even though it’s a kinda heady concept, you still worked in a lot of imagery.  It kept the song more anchored.  Some cool lines- such as the “gods and their... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Classroom 105

Thanks for sharing your work with us, Mike!  The title immediately made me curious.  I didn’t know where the song would go with it.  I like that it has some tempo/groove and is a fun, positive song.  Some good images, too.  Good clarity-... Read More

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Simon Says “ that kind of fun”

Hi, Michelle!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  Nice groove- some good imagery, too.  “Blanket and sandwich.”  Nice rhymes, too “sandwich” and “stranded.”  Some good work here.  Keep on writing!

Brent Baxter gave feedback on What Are You Doing in My Dream?

Hi, Richard.  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like the title alright, and your lyric supports it pretty well.  I like that you have some energy to your song.  It’s a “sad” song, but it doesn’t feel sad, and I think it... Read More