No second chances....Writers: Kay Mott/Mark Dolin
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Hi Kay
I liked the song here you wrote, It was a good melody, singer sang it well and lyrics painted the scenario of a lot of couples that probably go through this. Thanks for sharing
January 03, 2020
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Thank you Brent and Mike! I so get it that the title is too common! But I appreciate that reminder and I appreciate you feel a real life energy and we know ‘life keeps moving’ too. (sometimes not always to the positive:) Thanks, guys! Thanks from Mark:)
January 05, 2020
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There’ll be no lovin’ if you lie to me heard this in the song nice song
January 23, 2020
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Lie To Me@2019 Mott/Dolin
I’m not perfect, never claimed to be
But I ain’t buying what you’re sellin me
Bet you figured I’d never find out
Boy, sit yourself down, I did some checking around
Found some pictures on the web
That crazy woman wasn’t using her head
And if I see her out in this town
Honey, there’s gonna be one serious showdown
CHORUS
You better get down on your knees
Dig out the dirt and come clean
They’ll be no loving if you lie to me
The truth won’t hurt as deep
As the secrets that you keep
They’ll be no lovin if you lie to me
Swallow your guilt and feel it burn
End of story, lesson learned
I can tell you’re stuck, don’t know how to begin
Just say you’re sorry, it won’t happen again
Chorus
You better get down on your knees
Dig out the dirt and come clean
They’ll be no lovin if you lie to me
The truth won’t hurt as deep
As the secret that you keep
There’ll be no lovin’ if you lie to me
Bridge
I won’t lose more sleep over what you done
Getting’ good and drunk, and havin your fun
Chorus
You better get down on your knees
Dig out the dirt and come clean
They’ll be no loving if you lie to me
The truth won’t hurt as deep
As the secret that you keep
Yeah, they’ll be no lovin if you lie to me
No, I can’t love you, if you lie to me
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Hey, Kay! You and Mark make a good team. The title is pretty common. So in the future, go for more unique titles. I like that there is some energy to this one. It’s not a “positive” song, but the movement keeps it more commercial. Keep on writing!
January 03, 2020
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Hi Kay
I liked the song here you wrote, It was a good melody, singer sang it well and lyrics painted the scenario of a lot of couples that probably go through this. Thanks for sharing
January 03, 2020
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Thank you Brent and Mike! I so get it that the title is too common! But I appreciate that reminder and I appreciate you feel a real life energy and we know ‘life keeps moving’ too. (sometimes not always to the positive:) Thanks, guys! Thanks from Mark:)
January 05, 2020
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There’ll be no lovin’ if you lie to me heard this in the song nice song
January 23, 2020
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Brent Baxter
Hey, Kay! You and Mark make a good team. The title is pretty common. So in the future, go for more unique titles. I like that there is some energy to this one. It’s not a “positive” song, but the movement keeps it more commercial. Keep on writing!
January 03, 2020
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