Caryn Womack gave feedback on Feel Tomorrow

It’s perfect, instrumentation-wise, honestly. There’s definitely potential for it to be more heavily produced if you wanted to go that route (I could imagine some really cool drum parts in the background), but this stripped down version fits the lyrics and melody really well. It seems like a... Read More

Caryn Womack gave feedback on Wash it Away

You write the catchiest hooks and choruses! It’s awesome. I agree that the verses could be a little stronger and could maybe adhere moreso to a theme, but you definitely don’t need to rewrite them completely. Just change a few lines here and there so that it’s... Read More

Caryn Womack gave feedback on Westward Wind

Hey Nick, Good job with the folksiness! I’d say than it’s still a little more descriptive than narrative, but it suits the song really well. I wouldn’t worry too much about adhering to the 3-act concept. You’re more describing her quirks than their relationship, and the... Read More

Caryn Womack gave feedback on Slow Ride (Long Road)

So funny that you said that, Dennis, because I just randomly stumbled upon this song and thought “Wow, I really love this!” It’s great, Sarah. Simple, but it’s still dynamic. I love the “someone take a chance on me” line. I think you could tweak some of the... Read More

Caryn Womack gave feedback on Everything

I agree with Dick about the chorus. I enjoyed it! The title lines, in particular, are clever and work as a great theme. The song could definitely benefit from a more concrete narrative on the verses, though. You’ll really have something when you work out the details of the... Read More