Dennis Field gave feedback on Someday Soon

Chris, I like the inspiration for this song. Soon is not a time, I think that is really cool. The flats don’t bother me in this song at all. Hope that helps! There could be something to maybe speeding this up some. Especially the chorus. Maybe try to get... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on With Her

Randy, Welcome to Frettie! Great story to write about. My only immediate feedback would just be flow and timing. I think you have some nice lines in here, but for me it is just a matter of building the story in a way that slowly draws me into it. So... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Burn

You have a nice ability to sync the story to the music nicely. When I listen to this song, I get the feeling of the stress/frustration of a long distance relationship just by the tempo and guitar. That combined with your voice and the chorus really help tell the... Read More

Dennis Field gave feedback on Pillars

This is really cool and pretty. With my headphones on this really is moving.

Dennis Field gave feedback on Walking

This is very pretty! It really showcases your vocals. The way you end the song is really unique and actually was a nice variation, almost like falling into a dream and then coming out of it. Thanks for sharing.