I was in love with the wrong person.
Real neat! I enjoy the slow and steady power of the song. Really gives you a chance to feel the lyrics and the emotion in your voice.
January 23, 2014
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Shaking hands and breaking voice
You know I can't help but hold back so far from you
Tired eyes matching mine
You know I can't help but stay up so far from you
Lips on the back of my neck
My scent stuck in your bed
My words will break you
Your silence makes you every time
You see the truth is I'd rather lie
It's a sudden shock deep inside
You know I can't help but pull away so far from you
With your lips on the back of my neck
My scent stuck in your bed
My words will break you
Your silence makes you every time
You see the truth is I'd rather lie
Dreaming waking
Awake I'm walking
Hands are letting, letting go of what's left
You see the truth is I'd rather lie
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This is very pretty! It really showcases your vocals. The way you end the song is really unique and actually was a nice variation, almost like falling into a dream and then coming out of it.
Thanks for sharing.
January 17, 2014
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Real neat! I enjoy the slow and steady power of the song. Really gives you a chance to feel the lyrics and the emotion in your voice.
January 23, 2014
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Dennis Field
This is very pretty! It really showcases your vocals. The way you end the song is really unique and actually was a nice variation, almost like falling into a dream and then coming out of it.
Thanks for sharing.
January 17, 2014
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