Mark Lawhorne gave feedback on Words Apart

I agree with DeeDee, best one posted here. I kinda heat a little Elvis Costello vibe. Good stuff!

Mark Lawhorne gave feedback on Cockleburs

Wow! This may be my favorite one of yours. If I could sing, this is the voice I would want… LOL! Really great song!

Mark Lawhorne gave feedback on Only Lonely

Instantly relatable! I like the vulnerability and love the classic Patsy Cline feel to it. Also, I want to thank you for showing how much can be expressed in a simple two verse and two chorus song; i need to keep in my mind that sometimes shorter is better. Great... Read More

Mark Lawhorne gave feedback on Get Me A Dog

I think you hit all of the elements of break ups and bad relationships and why a dog is better. Its relatable and funny, but I agree with DeeDee that a few contextual changes could really enhance it. One small thing that I see is the bridge is a little... Read More

Mark Lawhorne gave feedback on The Shot I Never Took

I agree with DeeDee, I could hear Trace or Jason Aldean. So many artists could cut this and it would become a great tribute song for those that survived the mental scars. Its a great song filled with real emotions and honesty.