A song I wrote with my band WEEDS. We were a country/alt band here in Los Angeles. It's about a couple growing apart.
I'm open to any and all feedback. Let it rip.
I agree with DeeDee, best one posted here. I kinda heat a little Elvis Costello vibe. Good stuff!
June 01, 2026
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Love the title! And yeah, very cool vibe here. I wanna know about the Ovation in your hand too. - I dig ‘em. Nice job Gene and thx for sharing!
June 02, 2026
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I think it’s your best that I’ve heard here. Reminds me of Matchbox Twenty in a way. It helps to see the lyrics, but by listening only, what I think might make it better is to go ahead and say the worlds apart and words apart.
May 30, 2026
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I agree with DeeDee, best one posted here. I kinda heat a little Elvis Costello vibe. Good stuff!
June 01, 2026
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Love the title! And yeah, very cool vibe here. I wanna know about the Ovation in your hand too. - I dig ‘em. Nice job Gene and thx for sharing!
June 02, 2026
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DeeDee Beeler
I think it’s your best that I’ve heard here. Reminds me of Matchbox Twenty in a way. It helps to see the lyrics, but by listening only, what I think might make it better is to go ahead and say the worlds apart and words apart.
May 30, 2026
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