DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on I Lost Hope

Sweet, emotional story. I’m sure a lot of people would love this and relate. A couple lines:  4th line, 3rd verse - how about “after all” And the line in chorus that she never walked through the door gives expectations that she’s coming to you. Try his... Read More

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on How's It Go

I think this has a lot of potential. My opinion is that it needs some spit and polish, but the idea and general framework is there. I don’t see 2 songs there. Clarify the jist of the song more, the chorus. The supporting cast is there.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on Kind A Crazy

I want to know a bit more of what makes her kinda crazy.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on This Life That I Know

Easy to hear blues music with this I was boom boomin and twanging it.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on All I wanna do is Drink

Exaggerating is allowed. You gotta let the song become and sometimes that’s what they do. I think you’re heading the right direction with this. If this was my song, I’d let it sit untouched a while then go back and look at lyrics only to see where... Read More