DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on Better Than I Found It

A lot of us were taught this! It resonates. It would be great to share it in song too. I like that it’s a lesson song. It’s different than what we normally hear. Very good. I especially like the doorway line.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on Where I Belong

I love this! I think it would be better if it said scared “or” lonely so that way, it covers 2 separate emotions instead of being both.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on God The Father & Me

Campfire in the desert song with the cattle I’ve sang many like this alone on horseback. If you want to post the lyrics and add some structure, you could have something.

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on A Piece of Mine

How about the word “from” regarding cracks and weight. Very beautiful sentiment, pretty, encouraging

DeeDee Beeler gave feedback on I Lost Hope

Sweet, emotional story. I’m sure a lot of people would love this and relate. A couple lines:  4th line, 3rd verse - how about “after all” And the line in chorus that she never walked through the door gives expectations that she’s coming to you. Try his... Read More