No matter what you do, they refuse to try and pursue a relationship with you. Your only option of being with them is in your dreams.
Glad you enjoy the song! Especially since if I had to name a least favorite song of mine, it’d probably be this one! I did come up with the piano for it, and can play it, however on the recording—it is Chris Jamison playing. It was the second song I really wrote and recorded so having matured so much already since around December, when the first full album rolls around, Id love to re-record it and make some changes to it!
June 09, 2013
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Funny how that works. Sometimes the ones you wish you could take back because of them being created earlier on, can still have fans. I’d love to hear the re-recording. NO doubt it will be light years beyond this. Chris did a great job with the piano too.
June 09, 2013
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I really like the Piano in this. Is this you playing? I’m also a big fan of the the way you sing “I can hear the church bells ringing for you” it really helps make the chorus feel like a dream scene. You have a ton of really cool subtle things that you do in this song between the Piano and your singing it helps paint the story of someone really wishing this dream could come true. Nice job.
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Glad you enjoy the song! Especially since if I had to name a least favorite song of mine, it’d probably be this one! I did come up with the piano for it, and can play it, however on the recording—it is Chris Jamison playing. It was the second song I really wrote and recorded so having matured so much already since around December, when the first full album rolls around, Id love to re-record it and make some changes to it!
June 09, 2013
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Funny how that works. Sometimes the ones you wish you could take back because of them being created earlier on, can still have fans. I’d love to hear the re-recording. NO doubt it will be light years beyond this. Chris did a great job with the piano too.
June 09, 2013
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I really like the Piano in this. Is this you playing? I’m also a big fan of the the way you sing “I can hear the church bells ringing for you” it really helps make the chorus feel like a dream scene. You have a ton of really cool subtle things that you do in this song between the Piano and your singing it helps paint the story of someone really wishing this dream could come true. Nice job.
June 08, 2013
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